Look who showed up after all. I wasn’t going to include Ayonah as a lion kirin , but he is the perfect Dues ex Machina for this situation. Kade needed someone to guide him, and give some info, but not help with the thing he needs to do alone.
So, just like Yoda…oh well, tropes cannot be avoided.
I didn’t bother to explain why Ayonah is in this getup. There is a good reason, but if i try to explain everything on a page,it gets too wordy.
OMG! He is beautiful!! I never even considered the idea of a lion kirin – you are brilliant, Lady!
Oooh, I really hope you release a Lion Kirin sometime…gorgeous!!
Love the lion KiRin!
What happened to Kade’s glasses in the last frame?
OOPS forgot them.
I was going to ask where Podge went, but it looks like she’s hiding(?) under his hair?
Ayonah also appears in his lion kirin persona as part of the Windstone Forum Quests. I love his Forum avatar. 🙂
http://windstoneeditions.com/forum/introducing-myself-and-tanglian-wilderness
“Yeah, there’ll be chaos if you screw this up… But no pressure!” Continuing to love the dialogue and art in this story. I can’t believe you’re already nearing 100 pages!
-me either! I had no idea drawing out a comic was this demanding.Looks easy when you do it!
In the first box it looks like the order of dialogue should be Tannis “Gulp … Ayonah”, then Kade’s speech, and then Tannis again. Kade’s words and the first words from Tannis are aligned, and I’m reading Kade’s speech first because it is at the top. Would it be possible to shift Kade’s speech balloon to the right somewhat? Or am I not following things correctly?
ok, changed it.