Forbid? Forbade?
ok fixed stuff..
I thought this story would be 100 pages long… now I am not sure exactly how many pages long it will end up being , but we are nearing the end!
The Veligent – page 96
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Bwhahaa! I love the booming voice from above! The expressions are perfect.
Have/has forbidden.
AAK too long! hmm… I’ll have to redo that whole speech bubble.
second panel the word is “safety”
funny!
“I sent him away for his safety” instead of “saftey”.
And you could also say “the King forbade anyone” if it helps for space.
“saftey” doesn’t look quite right… but you probably already noticed that!
LOL… a bunch of us wrote that at the same time! 🙂
I’d personally suggest dialogue instead of dialog. Either works, dialogue is more traditional, while dialog is either computer tech, or a very Americanized spelling. It really depends on which you would prefer, and perhaps, which the owner of the booming voice would prefer.
That being said, I like the building suspense, capped off with the humor of the last panel. And I really want several pet Salps…
Another great page! If this is almost over then I’m gonna miss it. It’s been such fun! 😀
Talk about getting your orders from the top!
But … how can it end if we haven’t heard the rest of the story about Serence and Pav?
Well, since this is a story out of the middle of “Reptangle”, unfortunately there will be some loose ends. The Serence and Paverill part happens after this story.
I was planning to start posting the complete Reptangle story from the beginning, after “The Veligent” is over; you know, the way Star Wars started with the middle part then did the first part ( hope that comparison doesn’t turn everyone off).
I may need a break though, doing this comic is killing me!
Nearing the end? NOOOOOOOOO!!!