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Read my Batman story for me?

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  • #508246
    phantomess
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      I’m looking for any volunteers to read my Batman story. It’s 75 word document pages. All feedback welcome!
      I’d appreciate if you would tell me any of the following:
      -What you like and/or don’t like about the story
      -If you have any suggestions for improving some parts or aspects of the story
      -If you notice any grammar or spelling mistakes
      -If you begin reading it and dislike it so much you don’t want to finish (I can take it!)
      -If you have any title suggestions (My favorite title idea already exists in Batman comics. My only other title idea is not as great.)

      I only want honest input. I may or may not go make changes to the story for all suggestions, but every piece of feedback would be appreciated since it can help me learn and grow as a writer.

      If you’re willing to do me this favor, please let me know and I’ll e-mail it to you as an attachment.

      Oh, and no, you don’t have to have Batman knowledge.

      Formerly had the Batman & Joker avatar!

      #935467
      Bodine
      Participant

        I will!I will send you my email addy.
        I think,as an input,if you aren’t quite happy with the title,keep thinking on it. 😉

        Every act matters.No matter how small💞
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        Male Hearth....one day🤞Dream on.

        #935485
        phantomess
        Participant

          Yeah, still thinking on the title. I’m open to discussing my thoughts on that with anyone after they read it.
          E-mailed it to you! Thanks!
          🙂

          Formerly had the Batman & Joker avatar!

          #935532
          Kim
          Blocked

            You could e-mail it to me too. I will message with my e-mail.

            Looking for rainbow or pink & teal grab bags!

            #935942
            phantomess
            Participant

              Thank you to the couple of people who have messaged me with offers to read it, by the way. I will still e-mail it to anyone else who’d like to offer. The more opinions and suggestions, the better! 🙂
              Oh, and it has been pointed out to me that I needn’t have capitalized “Sir” whenever Alfred is addressing Bruce. I will be going through and fixing those eventually.

              Formerly had the Batman & Joker avatar!

              #937498
              phantomess
              Participant

                I wanted to edit my first post in here and the thread title, but it won’t seem to let me for some reason. Figured I’d just post my update here.

                I believe I finished tweaking things with the story and it’s now available to read at fanfiction.net. I still have to post the last few chapters but I’ll have them up soon. They’re done but I guess I just tend to take my time with things, haha.

                Link to story-
                https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11629584/1/Batman-Arkham-Sonata

                But mainly, I wanted to share the cover I made for it when I printed it out. The cover was kind of a lot of work for me since I’m really not much of an artist.

                Formerly had the Batman & Joker avatar!

                #937500

                The picture tells the story! Good job! And good story!! Thanks for letting me read it early on!

                #937514
                phantomess
                Participant

                  You’re welcome of course, and thanks so much! 🙂

                  Formerly had the Batman & Joker avatar!

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