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  1. starbreeze

    Fascinating story! Fantastic artwork (love the Flions). I can’t wait for the next installment! Thanks so much for letting us into your world!

  2. etruscan

    I think the color version is missing one of Ayonah’s speech balloons – a “No” after Kade says “Wouldn’t someone else be better?”

  3. Scathach

    I’m pretty sure that there wasn’t a balloon there before.

    Kade hasn’t finished speaking and Ayonah answers both questions on the next page.

  4. etruscan

    I meant in the upper panel.

    This is the version I just found on Melody’s DA page:

  5. Melody

    Fixed it! Thanks!
    Did you save all the black and white pages? Good idea.

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