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The Veligent – page 120

I know what you are thinking. Yes Kade’s bare feet do get injured doing this.
Sounds weird, but this has significance in much later stories.
This is posted on my Deviantart page too. On DA you can click on the image to see it full size. http://reptangle.deviantart.com/art/The-Veligent-Page-120-528244953

6 Comments

  1. Adaneth

    Ramsel’s skin/hair color looks a little monotone in that last panel?

    Is that Podge in the demon’s mouth??

    AUGH, another two weeks to wait! 😀

  2. wstone

    (This is Melody)
    Oh, yeah he did change color! oops.
    I have plenty to fix on this page!
    Yes. The demon was just helping Podge get back to the camp when he was spotted.

  3. shoeher

    Great! A new page! Joy! And the suspense goes on …

    Good eyes Adaneth. I wouldn’t have noticed Podge in the mouth. A hint what could come 🙂

    Yes, Ramsel’s hair and face is a bit to greenish. Maybe because he is so frightened by the roar?

  4. Melody

    or because I was in a rush and my art monitor is weird. I didn’t check this on the other monitor I have.
    I’ll replace this page as I fix things. If you revisit this page, refresh the page to see if anything improved.

  5. etruscan

    I don’t see Serence’s yondala in panel 7. Is it supposed to be visible or did he tuck it inside his shirt (or is it there and I just don’t see it)?

    His pajama pants seem to have changed color too. On page 119 it looks as though his pajama top and pants are the same color green.

  6. Melody

    yeah, I noticed that a couple days ago, and haven’t had time to fix it!
    I am going to have to go over every single page and fix all the mistakes before I print this book, so Thank you for spotting things! It is helpful!

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