A lot of information in a little space! The color is good this week, no green overtones. 🙂
Panel 3 – should it be “all of us noticed”?
Panel 4 – it looks as though the first action sound at the far left should be “Yank”, but the Y has been cut off. I can read “scuffle”, what is the third one?
Yeah ! It should be “Yank”..
Its clink, scuffle and oof
I couldn’t think of any good sounds for pulling bars off!
That is the way Berm talks… but probably should be “All’a us noticed”
I need to go back and remove some of the “them demons”. He says that too often.
I love the detail in that middle panel, and the way things keep twisting and turning…but is that guard by the words “to keep” supposed to be missing his/her face? 🙂
A lot of information in a little space! The color is good this week, no green overtones. 🙂
Panel 3 – should it be “all of us noticed”?
Panel 4 – it looks as though the first action sound at the far left should be “Yank”, but the Y has been cut off. I can read “scuffle”, what is the third one?
Yeah ! It should be “Yank”..
Its clink, scuffle and oof
I couldn’t think of any good sounds for pulling bars off!
That is the way Berm talks… but probably should be “All’a us noticed”
I need to go back and remove some of the “them demons”. He says that too often.
I love the detail in that middle panel, and the way things keep twisting and turning…but is that guard by the words “to keep” supposed to be missing his/her face? 🙂
Maybe a missing apostrophe in panel 1 – should givin have a apostrophe in place of the missing final G?
Yeah, I just noticed that!
I moved the word balloon a bit at the last minute and exposed an unknown soldier!
I’ll fix it, and other stuff tonight.
after “talkin” too
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