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The Veligent – page 34

This is the other half of the double spread page..if some of the speech balloons are hard to read, let me know and I will fix them tonight, when I get time.

*edit* Ok, I fixed this half of the page so the two halves will fit together now.
I still don’t know how to fix the misspelling on the table of contents!

7 Comments

  1. Branzy

    Hey Melody….ya spelled the Veligent wrong on the page 34 listing. Not trying to be a critic but only trying to help. You spelled it Veliggent.

    This story is so awesome and I am still hooked on reading it and I sooooooooo love the illustration! BRILLIANT!!!! 🙂 I love all the head dresses and the kids are so darn cute!!

  2. Melody

    yeah, Thanks! caught that.
    THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
    (Hmm… I have fixed every which way I can find, and it still shows up misspelled.)

  3. Dragonshoard

    Uh, Melody, I noticed that there is some overlap in the middle between the two pictures. So when I put them in two separate windows and line them up over each other, the spacing is different for the things in the center that show up on both pages. If you line up the little figures dancing in the upper section of the picture, the line for the mountainside isn’t too bad, but the person near the bottom petting the bird whose head is partly obscured by the text balloon doesn’t line up. If he(she?) lines up, the flags under the cat seem to line up.
    Sorry to be picky. I presume this would be fixed in a printed version and it would just be a two-page spread that went all the way to the center.

  4. Melody

    Yup, I was trying to line them up to post them together and found that they don’t fit.
    I intentionally allowed some overlap on the “gutter” side when I posted the two halves separately.
    I’ll need to fix the size discrepancy between the two pages when I get time. At some point I must of enlarged this page a little.
    *edit* ok I fixed the size problem.
    I haven’t figured out how to fix the misspelling yet…This is what happens when I upload stuff in a hurry!

  5. WolfenMachine

    This page must have taken forever to draw with all the faces!

  6. MJI

    The rest of the pages so far are colored. I guess that will be something you’ll do for this one too?

    • Melody

      Oh, just new website glitches. This page has a color version, but for some reason the black and white image shows instead. I’ll try to update it when I get a chance.

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