The Veligent – page 33

Two pages here.
I added more people,animals, and a few other changes to these pages.

9 Comments

  1. Branzy

    I agree that a little bit bolder would be better for the shaded text. In particular the comments about squirrel pee are very hard to read HEHE

  2. Melody

    I enlarged some of the speech balloons a little, but I still have trouble reading the grey words easily on the monitor that is set really light. They look ok on my dark laptop.
    If you still have trouble reading it easily, I will tweak it some more.

  3. dragonmedley

    I spot a lady cat!

  4. akryl9296

    It’s all okay and readable on my monitor :]
    But I have to say one thing, the navigation around the comic is really awkward…

  5. Melody

    Yeah we are working it… What should be changed?
    I know the link from the box on the Windstone website landing page isn’t working right.

  6. Melody

    Ha ha, yes, I used somebody’s coa sketch for the cat.

  7. etruscan

    The smallest lettering is still too light to read easily on my monitor.

  8. Melody

    I darkened the lettering a little, but I may need to enlarge it as well, I have trouble reading it too.

  9. stasher-dragon

    Hahaha@ squirrel pee. We get enough of it on our window sill (where we feed them) that sometimes it smells like an outhouse.

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