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  • #1634376
    etruscan
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    Page 112:

    Melody says, “I took the month of December off, from doing pages.. It was nice.”

    rueday_page112

    #1634847
    etruscan
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    Page 113:

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    #1634849
    etruscan
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    Top panel, upper right dialog bubble – It should be “They’ll get instructions …” (not “The’ll get instructions).

    #1634850
    Melody
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    Top panel, upper right dialog bubble – It should be “They’ll get instructions …” (not “The’ll get instructions).

    yes, I saw that after I posted it! I’ll fix it tonite.

    #1636083
    etruscan
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    Page 114:

    Melody says, “Jeese!The trouble I’ve had with this page! I somehow LOST the entire first version… I’m sure it is somewhere on my computer, but I couldn’t find it, but that’s ok, because I didn’t like it anyway. I don’t think this totally different replacement page is that great either, but it nudges the story along a tiny bit. Kid might be trouble.”

    Rueday_page114

    #1636106
    Megan
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    Ha! I love it! Kid took the bait hook, line and sinker.

    #1636437
    pdlucich
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    It’s a great story Melody, but in the THREE YEARS it’s been running I’ve lost track of who some of these characters are. I’d re-read but some of the pages are no longer showing.

    Oh, I get it. You’re in league with that nasty monkey to drive us all insane, aren’t you?

    I was normal three cats ago....Well, no. Not really. But it sounds good.

    #1636442
    etruscan
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    Melody has uploaded pages 1 to 110 of “Rue Day” to a location on the Windstone Editions site and presumably will continue to add pages over time. You can read it here:

    https://windstoneeditions.com/story/rue-day/

    #1636473
    Melody
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    It’s a great story Melody, but in the THREE YEARS it’s been running I’ve lost track of who some of these characters are. I’d re-read but some of the pages are no longer showing.

    Oh, I get it. You’re in league with that nasty monkey to drive us all insane, aren’t you?

    The characters here are:
    King Furic, the scruffy-looking guy,
    Marlie his “queen”, “right-hand man”, “vice king”, advisor, or whatever she calls herself,
    and Sir Thork in his bush dog-demon form.
    The angsty “kid” is the person King Furic has chosen as his personal bodyguard. Maybe not the ideal choice, but that is what this part of the story is about.
    These are the leaders of the rebels that King Serence considers his adversaries. He can’t take a joke.
    I haven’t posted pages 111-115 here yet. I want to fix things in them and haven’t gotten around to it.

    #1637429
    etruscan
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    Page 115:

    Rueday_page115

    #1637431
    etruscan
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    Page 113 – I just noticed this and maybe you already have fixed it – Sir Thork says “and” twice.
    “… try keeping a Veligent and and a royal guard hostage?”

    #1637435
    Melody
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    Page 113:

    rueday_page113

    fixed it!

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    #1638195
    etruscan
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    Page 116:
    Melody says, “I always slap these pages together and post them, then go back and fix stuff. Stuff Like-all the stuff: inconsistent faces, text balloons that drifted a little ( last panel), white edges showing . Don’t look.”

    rueday_page116

    #1638197
    etruscan
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    Am I the only person who thinks that kid looks a lot like Ayonah?

    #1638198
    BigCatKeeper
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    Am I the only person who thinks that kid looks a lot like Ayonah?

    I thought the same thing, Etruscan!

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