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  • #1634847
    etruscan
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      Page 113:

      rueday_page113

      #1634849
      etruscan
      Participant

        Top panel, upper right dialog bubble – It should be “They’ll get instructions …” (not “The’ll get instructions).

        #1634850
        Melody
        Keymaster

          Top panel, upper right dialog bubble – It should be “They’ll get instructions …” (not “The’ll get instructions).

          yes, I saw that after I posted it! I’ll fix it tonite.

          #1636083
          etruscan
          Participant

            Page 114:

            Melody says, “Jeese!The trouble I’ve had with this page! I somehow LOST the entire first version… I’m sure it is somewhere on my computer, but I couldn’t find it, but that’s ok, because I didn’t like it anyway. I don’t think this totally different replacement page is that great either, but it nudges the story along a tiny bit. Kid might be trouble.”

            Rueday_page114

            #1636106

            Ha! I love it! Kid took the bait hook, line and sinker.

            #1636437

            It’s a great story Melody, but in the THREE YEARS it’s been running I’ve lost track of who some of these characters are. I’d re-read but some of the pages are no longer showing.

            Oh, I get it. You’re in league with that nasty monkey to drive us all insane, aren’t you?

            It's not hoarding if it's books!
            Cat hair -- condiment and fashion accessory!

            #1636442
            etruscan
            Participant

              Melody has uploaded pages 1 to 110 of “Rue Day” to a location on the Windstone Editions site and presumably will continue to add pages over time. You can read it here:

              https://windstoneeditions.com/story/rue-day/

              #1636473
              Melody
              Keymaster

                It’s a great story Melody, but in the THREE YEARS it’s been running I’ve lost track of who some of these characters are. I’d re-read but some of the pages are no longer showing.

                Oh, I get it. You’re in league with that nasty monkey to drive us all insane, aren’t you?

                The characters here are:
                King Furic, the scruffy-looking guy,
                Marlie his “queen”, “right-hand man”, “vice king”, advisor, or whatever she calls herself,
                and Sir Thork in his bush dog-demon form.
                The angsty “kid” is the person King Furic has chosen as his personal bodyguard. Maybe not the ideal choice, but that is what this part of the story is about.
                These are the leaders of the rebels that King Serence considers his adversaries. He can’t take a joke.
                I haven’t posted pages 111-115 here yet. I want to fix things in them and haven’t gotten around to it.

                #1637429
                etruscan
                Participant

                  Page 115:

                  Rueday_page115

                  #1637431
                  etruscan
                  Participant

                    Page 113 – I just noticed this and maybe you already have fixed it – Sir Thork says “and” twice.
                    “… try keeping a Veligent and and a royal guard hostage?”

                    #1637435
                    Melody
                    Keymaster

                      Page 113:

                      rueday_page113

                      fixed it!

                      #1638195
                      etruscan
                      Participant

                        Page 116:
                        Melody says, “I always slap these pages together and post them, then go back and fix stuff. Stuff Like-all the stuff: inconsistent faces, text balloons that drifted a little ( last panel), white edges showing . Don’t look.”

                        rueday_page116

                        #1638197
                        etruscan
                        Participant

                          Am I the only person who thinks that kid looks a lot like Ayonah?

                          #1638198
                          BigCatKeeper
                          Participant

                            Am I the only person who thinks that kid looks a lot like Ayonah?

                            I thought the same thing, Etruscan!

                            #1638199

                            Good pep talk, Your Majesty. Good pep talk. lol

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