Original Poem – Zirkallian

[Sirithiliel]

This is a original Poem I wrote, and I’ve been painting a accompanying picture for it for years now, off and on. I’m just wanting some feed back on it, please don’t use my poem without my permission.

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Zirkallion

There was a dragon in my dream,
Even now, I see him clear,
His hide a glittery, glorious gleam,
That wasn’t pierced by any spear

Instead of scales he bore jewels
Emeralds, sapphires, rubies and more.
As if crafted by the finest tools
On wings of diamonds did he soar.

Glorious color and shining hue
Fangs of diamond, eyes of pearl,
Hiding deep, seen by few
In mystery and secrets does he swirl

In my dreams this dragon stays,
Safe from prying eyes
Like a pile of treasure he lays
and from my pen his image flies

[WindstoneWench]

Bravo!

(That’s coming from an English major! We are a dime a dozen, but sometimes feared/respected for our brandishing of red pens.)

😉

[Sirithiliel]

Thanks XD I’m not a English major or anything, I just write and illustrate short stories and children’s books. Mostly for the illustrating, and making the story to fit the picture I come up with =)

I’m glad you like it ^^ I plan to do a picture to go with this, but i’m having problems getting gem scales done XD;

[Robin]

Very good. Very visual.

[Brandy]

Very well written…….great job

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