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    Robin
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      Hooves fall

      Nostrils flare

      Race the wind and drink the air

      Tendons strained

      Muscles toned

      Feel of grass and crunch of stone

      Streaming tail

      Flying mane

      Pull ahead while others wane

      Fight the last

      Pass them all

      Take the lead by one hoof fall

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      Hooves fall

      Nostrils flare

      Race the wind and drink the air

      Tendons strained

      Muscles toned

      Feel of grass and crunch of stone

      Streaming tail

      Flying mane

      Pull ahead while others wane

      Fight the last

      Pass them all

      Take the lead by one hoof fall

      God Robin you have such a talent for evoking emotion and giving an image to your writing!! I love your poetry. I can see exactly what you are conveying in my mind!! Brilliant once again!! 🙂

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