It bugs me that the resolution of these pages needs to be so low, it is darn hard to read!
In the third panel, Tannis is saying ” Hurry! They are taking the shortcut!”
The Veligent – page 91
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My eyes are not so good Ms.Melody and I read it fine so don’t sweat it.I came looking for this earlier today,needed my Veligent fix.Thanks for sharing.I love it.
Nice job on the story development! All the text is readable on my full size monitor with no problem.
It probably should be “Conduct unbecoming a veligent” [no “of”], or possibly “Conduct unbecoming to a veligent”, but I think the first option is better.
Ok I fixed it. Click “refresh”
“Unclear on the concept”
Bwahahaha! What’s the penalty for that?
Ha ha ha -I dunno, I just wanted to stick more transgressions in there, and couldn’t think of any others. I do think that is one of them, though.
Great new page! 😀
How does a veligent relate to the military? I would expect him to be outside that organization – and it certainly sounds as though Lark went his own way. As someone tested and appointed by Ayonah, would a veligent be subject to military discipline and Captain Pol’s ideas of proper conduct?
He is subject to military law while he is serving in the military unit ( put in place by Serence, enforced to the letter by the Captains), Ayonian law, AND the Veligent code. The three aren’t necessarily in sync, as we shall see.
Like Lark, Kade doesn’t seem to take Military Law too seriously. Perhaps he should.
“It bugs me that the resolution of these pages needs to be so low…”
Sorry if this has already been mentioned, but how about uploading the higher resolution images to deviant art and pasting the link here?