Someone to read my story?

[Robin]

I am looking for some people to read my story. The story is not complete. Currently it spans 12 pages. I have hit a wall and really just need someone to tell me it’s not complete dren so that I can push through and continue. I have the entire story in my head, it just refuses to come out at times.

You agree not to share the story with anyone else. Maybe, if it is good enough, I will see about getting it published. As it stands I just need some motivation to push through this block I have.

I know it is still very rough but you are welcome to correct any mistakes you see and suggest flow changes.

So who’s up for it?

[Carolyn]

I’ve shared stories with friends . I never give them to anyone else . I’m a writer too . Just not on my computer . I used pen and paper .
I’d never steal anyone’s idea either .

[dragonmedley]

I would recommend this writing website/forum: http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/

You can post and get feedback from more than one person, or do it privately – there’s a whole section for beta-readers.

Read my books! Volume 1 and 2 of A Dragon Medley are available now.
http://www.sarahjestin.com/mybooks.htm
I host the feedback lists, which are maintained by drag0nfeathers.
http://www.sarahjestin.com/feedbacklists.htm

[Brandy]

I’d be willing to give it a read through and let you know what I think. Let me know if you want me to. I totally understand the “wall” and the difficulty translating what is in your head to the written word. Hard to take a fertile imagination and give it life in print.

I posted comment on you “Little Queen” a little while ago.

[Adaneth]

If it’s in the fantasy or science fiction genres, I’d be happy to take a look at it. 🙂

[Robin]

Thank you all for voluntering. Just facing the fact that I had a block and my wanting to work through it helped. I have managed to get past it. I do still want you to read it but I will wait now until my current momentum has slowed.

And yes, it is fantasy. And it is centered on dragons. Unlike most fantasy there are no humans at all. The working title is Dram, Drake, Drun.

[Adaneth]

Delighted to hear you got rolling again. Good luck!

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