This one is for a friend of Stars. I would appriciate any feedback, so long as its something I am capable of 😆 I am not sure I like the face, but the rest is ok to me. What do you guys think? He is not clearcoated yet.
The wings are lovely and the gold accents fit nicely. I only see two things I’d change: I’d fix the places on the feathers wheere the blue from the secondaries smudged onto the primaries. It shows well on the first photo. I would also tone down the gold around the eyes and make those areas darker, not lighter.
Other than that it looks good.