It is an interesting exercise to design a page so that you know who is talking, even though the characters are “off camera”.
The Veligent – page 43
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It is an interesting exercise to design a page so that you know who is talking, even though the characters are “off camera”.
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Love it!! 🙂
You did a fantastic job of making it clear to the reader whom was speaking and the inflection is clear in how they are saying it too. I can see the scowels on their faces and the very Pi$$ed off stance that every younger sibling gets when the older ones believe that they are not mature or capable enough! Can you tell I am the baby of 4 girls. I totally know how he feels!!! 🙂