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Here there be nagas…

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    Gale
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      Gale
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        A short piece I did last week. I don’t have much in the way of original work up anyplace, but I thought this one might interest someone here, given the whole fantasy thing. *shrug*

        http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/43078217/

        …and now, I really, REALLY need to get back to my NANO piece…*sweatdrop*

        #510387
        Maria
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          Neat story, Kashu. That wasn’t the end of it, I hope? What does Kyran do with it?

          #510388

          He set me aside?

          🙁

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          Gale
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            That wasn’t the end of it, I hope? What does Kyran do with it?

            There will be a sequel at some point. No idea when – my life just took a rather extream and not-too-pleasing turn. But there will eventually be a sequel.

            #510390
            Patricia
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              Neat story! I like it. Be sure to tell us when the sequel gets done. 🙂

              While hiding somewhere in my head I'm on the lookout for white oriental dragons! Please let me know if you know of any available. Thank you!

              #510391
              NirvanaCat13
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                kashuarashi wrote:

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                That wasn’t the end of it, I hope? What does Kyran do with it?

                There will be a sequel at some point. No idea when – my life just took a rather extream and not-too-pleasing turn. But there will eventually be a sequel.


                *clap clap clap clap* Brava! Very nice and enticing. I hope that events in your life take a better note, and I hope that you can turn your writings to your advantage, minus the little grammatical errors (easy enough to fix =P) It was wonderful! Very intreging, and leaving the reader wanting more!

                #510392

                I agree with everyone else, this story must be continued! I was sucked in as soon as I realized it was about naga. The way you executed the character descriptions, just revealing a little bit at a time until it’s relevant, was very well done.

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