Call me crazy but some of the “slang” uses that you use (would of) when characters are talking makes it seems more realistic to me. I know that everyday in random conversations we slang use many terms and shorten words. I just thought the way you wrote it made it seem like more of a “natural” conversational tone and use ***shrugs***
Looks great to me and I love the Pop Pop Pop sooo cute. I really want one for real!! Wish that were possible….wish it and it is so! 🙂
The Poad is really cute!
(and in panel 1, the phrase is “would have” not “would of”)
Ok! Thanks! ( did I make the same mistake before?… erg…)
I think you’re missing the apostrophe in “she’s fine”.
Yes I did, you have good eyes!
I’m re-drawing the bottom panel, so I’ll change this page when I get that sorted out.
Call me crazy but some of the “slang” uses that you use (would of) when characters are talking makes it seems more realistic to me. I know that everyday in random conversations we slang use many terms and shorten words. I just thought the way you wrote it made it seem like more of a “natural” conversational tone and use ***shrugs***
Lots of the slang is intentional, but I should fix the things that aren’t !