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The Veligent – page 59

Play the “Indiana Jones” theme in your head.

13 Comments

  1. Melody

    Ah, my. I already see a typo I missed. I meant “research”.
    and “strugggle” needs help.
    “Grckz” is spelled correctly though.
    Ok, I fixed all the ones I could find. Hit the “refresh ” button to see changes, if it matters.

  2. dragonmedley

    We wouldn’t want you to mispell “grckz”…

  3. Kyrin

    See..Serence panicked & Kade calmly handled things. Yep, I still believe there is more to him than he lets on.

  4. rock-reader

    Ms Pena, you do REALLY GOOD fantasy creatures (both plant, animal and whatever…). They are awesome!! I can’t wait for Mondays so see what happens next in this graphic novel – wonderful!

  5. Blue Heron Gallery

    Snooze button in a snake, I like it! Knew Kade was a true fool, they always know what to do, even when heading into danger. Poor Serence must feel unnecessary. I didn’t notice typos until they were pointed out. Great panel

  6. Barrdwing

    “Snakes. Why did it have to be snakes?” –IJ

  7. etruscan

    Doesn’t it have two Rs? 😉

  8. Falcolf

    Emergency snooze button hahah! 😀 That’s just excellent!

  9. Melody

    Probably! I misspell everything else!

  10. Melody

    Thank you so much for reading it!

  11. etruscan

    I still say the problem with Kade is his relationship with the rest of the universe. It is great that he can heal Serence, but would the situation even have occurred if Kade wasn’t off picking Leopard King Cups?

    This journey should be an interesting learning experience for him.

  12. Lyrak

    I wonder, too, if it would have occurred if Serence had stopped trying to be lofty for a moment and learned to speak concisely and get to the point. He had known Kade all his life, yet still does not recognize that his brother’s attention wanders and that he needs to be brief. They both have things to learn, I think. Kade needs focus, Serence needs to learn what to focus ON.

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