10 Comments

  1. dragonmedley

    I like the diagnosis…

  2. Falcolf

    I love how he calls him dude! XD

  3. etruscan

    Looks like a relationship not made in heaven. 🙂 I can’t tell – is “inferior” spelled correctly?

  4. Melody

    Yes there is an “i” in there.

  5. etruscan

    According to my dictionary, it is “nonsense” with two esses, not an S and a C (I had to look it up).

    Just out of curiosity – why does the last panel have a not-straight edge? It looks fine, but is different from all the others.

  6. Melody

    I was trying to show the pressure of the sound waves from the Captian’s loud voice pummeling the panel – eh, didn’t look good, so I changed it.
    I fixed “nonsense”. Thank you!

  7. Lyrak

    Did he just call the captain anal-retentive? XD

  8. etruscan

    I like the new arrangement. The first two panels are much easier to read now. Did you redraw the captain in panel 6 as well as the other changes?

  9. Melody

    Yes I re-drew the Captain. The pace of this relationship not-made-in-heaven was proceeding too quickly.

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