I haven’t worked out the dialogue on this page very well. I think the dialogue in the middle part is too rushed. What’s here is just place holders for better writing, if I can ever do that. In panel 6, it is just the cliche’ statement that military...
I wanted to weedwack the yard this weekend, so instead of making an excuse for not doing a page, I did a fairly simple page. I always feel guilty when there isn’t much content. Watch out for the guard, though. Ok I changed “yike” to...
Look who showed up after all. I wasn’t going to include Ayonah as a lion kirin , but he is the perfect Dues ex Machina for this situation. Kade needed someone to guide him, and give some info, but not help with the thing he needs to do alone. So, just like...
Forbid? Forbade? ok fixed stuff.. I thought this story would be 100 pages long… now I am not sure exactly how many pages long it will end up being , but we are nearing the end!
oops… forgot General Ramsall’s cheek scratches in the lower panels …Gad,I always miss something! and I am not sure why his pillow turned lime green… I kinda like it though. *edit* Ok now I added cheek scratches and a few other details, still...
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